That Red Rose
“Be mine forever”, he said in the most romantic voice, kneeling down on his knees.
She blushed to match the red color of the rose in his hand and a tear of joy escaped to kiss it.
“Mom!!!! Come here please and help me out in…”, shouted Tia from the kitchen, her seventeen year old daughter.
“Coming sweetheart… just coming..”, she stammered as she wiped the tears off his photograph.
It’s been 16 years since their Forever ended but the memories of this day were as fresh as the rose he had proposed her with.
Linking this to Five Sentence Fiction- Fresh and Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge
Wonderful and romantic~ I can almost smell the freshness of the rose ~ 🙂
Thanks John! Welcome to Expressions! 🙂
‘Mine forever’ & Red Rose both me immense thoughts for life.Good
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Thank you so much 🙂
Wow!! I wasn’t expecting this ending! Good one nibhz 🙂
Thanka Swathi 🙂
wow.. so beautiful.. loved the words ‘forever ended’. perfect.
Thank you so much 🙂
good one in 5 sentences 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Beautiful tale, Nibha. Emotional note 🙂
Thanks shailaja 🙂
Beautiful and touching…memories !
Yaah.. memories do make us smile and cry!!
Touching story you managed to tell in just 5 sentences. Good one!
Thank you so much 🙂
awww this is heartbreaking… beautiful story.
Thanks Rajlakshmi 🙂
Beautiful 🙂
Thanks Sam!! 😀 Welcome To Expressions 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Oh how sad…but so romantic. This was awesome! ♥
Thanks a ton Kathy 🙂
Flashback and nostalgia! Lethal combination. You’ve brought them out together beautifully here 🙂
Thanks a ton Vinodini for your appreciating words!
Lovely! As fresh as that rose you have talked about. 🙂
Thanks Deboshree!!!! Welcome here. 🙂